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Crimson Rising

Tue Nov 6, 2007, 11:32 AM

CRIMSON RISING

Into the darkness, out of the light
Keeping safe what is not safe
Running into rage
Falling down the edge

Blood is thicker than water,
Rage is fire, peace is something we dont know about
Anymore
Its the age of CRIMSON RISING
Also known as the Time of Dying

There is no hope when darkness swallows
E V E R Y T H I N G
There is no freedom when everything belongs to THEM
CRIMSON RISING
Flesh torn apart, 'cause the world is dying
And that's just the start

You can fight, you can scream
But forget about your DREAM
The world is painted in CRIMSON now
Weapons are shining in the moon of the dying world
Crimson streets, seas and earth
There is no coming back, no return,
CRIMSON RISING
The time of dying
THE END
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Mood: Gloomy
Reading: Terry Pratchet - Diggers

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~lillie143 Nov 6, 2007, 7:06:28 PM

that's beautiful. i especially like the last stanza. if you don't mind me asking, what inspired you to write this poem??

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"He's like a drug for you, Bella." His voice was still gentle, not at all critical. "I see that you can't live without him now. It's too late. But I would have been healthier for you. Not a drug; I would have been the air, the sun."

~badfinger Nov 7, 2007, 4:13:22 AM

Well not everything is going well these days ... and I was listening to CRUSH EM by Megadeth and than I started writing...

Glad you like it!

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"Be yourself is all you can do..."

~Joelglaine Nov 7, 2007, 7:47:37 AM

Worlds are born and worlds die.

So the wheel of time turns again.

Pretty cool stuff. It's better if dis-believed.

I'm waiting for Global Warming to make my area of the world a tropical Paradise!

There are good sides to everything.

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Member of the Guernican Art Commandos--"ART FOR ART'S SAKE!"

~lillie143 Nov 7, 2007, 4:48:44 PM

sorry to hear things aren't going well. and sweetness!!!

i love that band!

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"He's like a drug for you, Bella." His voice was still gentle, not at all critical. "I see that you can't live without him now. It's too late. But I would have been healthier for you. Not a drug; I would have been the air, the sun."

~badfinger Nov 8, 2007, 3:19:36 AM

Yeah I know what you mean. These days I still strugle to find myself... but I guess I'm finding my path out now. Ok, everything changes ... we will see

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"Be yourself is all you can do..."

~badfinger Nov 8, 2007, 9:47:58 AM

Well they go ok... just not I would like it and its all fucking complicated

But yeah I love Megadeth too

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"Be yourself is all you can do..."

~Joelglaine Nov 8, 2007, 10:21:28 AM

^__^V,,

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Member of the Guernican Art Commandos--"ART FOR ART'S SAKE!"

~lillie143 Nov 8, 2007, 10:24:51 PM

your words seem so sad though. i really hope things go better for you. *hug* if it helps any.

yes. amazing band.

je les aime!!

--
"He's like a drug for you, Bella." His voice was still gentle, not at all critical. "I see that you can't live without him now. It's too late. But I would have been healthier for you. Not a drug; I would have been the air, the sun."